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Answer the following question:
How does the language in the extract influence your view of the relationship between George and Lennie?
Write 2x P.E.A paragraphs, each one double blocked. For each quotation, you need both language and word level analysis. The start of each P.E.A needs to be an umbrella point.
Evening of a hot day started the little wind to moving among the leaves. The
shade climbed up the hills toward the top. On the sand banks the rabbits sat as
quietly as little gray sculptured stones. And then from the direction of the state
highway came the sound of footsteps on crisp sycamore leaves. The rabbits
hurried noiselessly for cover. A stilted heron labored up into the air and
pounded down river. For a moment the place was lifeless, and then two men
emerged from the path and came into the opening by the green pool.
They had walked in single file down the path, and even in the open one
stayed behind the other. Both were dressed in denim trousers and in denim coats
with brass buttons. Both wore black, shapeless hats and both carried tight
blanket rolls slung over their shoulders. The first man was small and quick, dark
of face, with restless eyes and sharp, strong features. Every part of him was
defined: small, strong hands, slender arms, a thin and bony nose. Behind him
walked his opposite, a huge man, shapeless of face, with large, pale eyes, and
wide, sloping shoulders; and he walked heavily, dragging his feet a little, the
way a bear drags his paws. His arms did not swing at his sides, but hung
loosely.
The first man stopped short in the clearing, and the follower nearly ran over
him. He took off his hat and wiped the sweat-band with his forefinger and
snapped the moisture off. His huge companion dropped his blankets and flung
himself down and drank from the surface of the green pool; drank with long
gulps, snorting into the water like a horse. The small man stepped nervously
beside him.
“Lennie!” he said sharply. “Lennie, for God’ sakes don’t drink so much.”
Lennie continued to snort into the pool. The small man leaned over and shook
him by the shoulder. “Lennie. You gonna be sick like you was last night.”
Lennie dipped his whole head under, hat and all, and then he sat up on the
bank and his hat dripped down on his blue coat and ran down his back. “That’s
good,” he said. “You drink some, George. You take a good big drink.” He
smiled happily.
George unslung his bindle and dropped it gently on the bank. “I ain’t sure it’s
good water,” he said. “Looks kinda scummy.”
Lennie dabbled his big paw in the water and wiggled his fingers so the water
arose in little splashes; rings widened across the pool to the other side and came
back again. Lennie watched them go. “Look, George. Look what I done.”
George knelt beside the pool and drank from his hand with quick scoops.
“Tastes all right,” he admitted. “Don’t really seem to be running, though. You
never oughta drink water when it ain’t running, Lennie,” he said hopelessly.
“You’d drink out of a gutter if you was thirsty.” He threw a scoop of water into
his face and rubbed it about with his hand, under his chin and around the back
of his neck. Then he replaced his hat, pushed himself back from the river, drew
up his knees and embraced them. Lennie, who had been watching, imitated
George exactly. He pushed himself back, drew up his knees, embraced them,
looked over to George to see whether he had it just right. He pulled his hat
down a little more over his eyes, the way George’s hat was.
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ReplyDeletestienbeck uses language to show us that george is lennies carer and looks after him. evidence in the text shows "lennie, lennie for god sakes dont drink so much". the expletive 'lennie for god sakes dont drink so much' shows that george looks after lennie as if a father would look after his son and also it shows that lennie has the brain of a child as he constantly needs to be told directions. the words 'god sakes'- a religous noun-shows that george is tired of giving lennie orders and is asking god for help and strength to carry on looking after lennie as he fails to understand simple communication skills.
ReplyDeletesteinbeck also uses language to show us that lennie constantly tries to impress george. evidence shows "look george, look what i done". the expletive also shows that lennie is continually looking for georges approval as he tries to humour george with childish actions. the word 'done' shows lennies under educated mind as george is 'done' with education and understands the basic, neccesary survival skills lennie is still trying to understand the basic skills that we all take for granted.
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DeleteSuccess: Used word level and language feature analysis for each quotation.
Target: 'Expletive' means a swear word - 'God sakes' could just about pass off an expletive, however there are not expletives in "look george, look what i done". I think you might mean imperative, or command, which is where we tell someone what to do.
Make sure that you identify different language features for each evidence in your P.E.A, and that they are correctly identified.
The relationship between George and Lennie is portrayed as a parent-child relationship, in which George is the more dominant, protective figure towards Lennie. “Lennie. You gonna be sick like you was last night.” This indicates that George is fretful in case Lennie becomes unwell or overcomes a sick state. Furthermore, 'sick' suggests that George communicates with Lennie as though he is some sort of child who is unable to take care of himself independently.
ReplyDeleteIn addition, Lennie acts as though he is an immature child, who is very fond of his minder George by caring for him in return and ensuring George's needs are satisfied as well as only his own.'“You drink some, George. You take a good big drink.” He smiled happily.' This illustrates that Lennie feels a lot of loving attachment towards George, in which the author Steinbeck is attempting to convey that Lennie is as protective over George, as George is toward Lennie.
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Geoge's relationship with Lennie is portrayed here as though of an Father a
ReplyDeletend son Relationship with George being the Father and Lennie the son "lennie
you're going to be sick like you was last night". this therfore highlights
his role as a protecter over Lennie and that George also Has This strong m
inded care for Lennie and He is trying to prevent Lennie from becoming sick
or ill. the word sick - a use of colloquial language- here suggests that l
ennie is being treated like a child and is therefore even being reffered as
Being A child by George using this term "sick" which is commonly used for
a child.
Thus Lennie Reflects himself as an immature child who see's George as someo
ne who is his role model, and by George being Lennie;s "child minder" reass
ures and affirms George's status as a carer, this then makes Lennie try his
absolute Hardest to make George be appreciated for what he has done for hi
m "you drink some, George you take a good big drink", he smilled happily. t
his reinforces that Lennie has a lot of affection towards George Which Stei
nbeck is trying to convey in this Passage.
by Sandra Boakye
Evening of a hot day started the little wind to moving among the leaves. The
ReplyDeleteShade climbed up the hills toward the top. On the sand banks the rabbits sat as
Quietly as little gravy sculptured stones. And then from the direction of the state
Highway came the sound of footsteps on crisp sycamore leaves. The rabbits
Hurried noiselessly for cover. A stilted heron laboured up into the air and
Pounded down river. For a moment the place was lifeless, and then two men
Emerged from the path and came into the opening by the green pool.
Sound Imagery
Metaphors
Adjectives
Similes
The author uses metaphors, similes, pathetic fallacy, adjectives and sound imagery to describe the natural aroma in the air before George and lennie interrupt this and are introduced to us in the book. The author uses a metaphor and pathetic fallacy to describe the shade. “Shade climbed up the hills towards the top”. Shade can’t really climb the mountain however the author has done this to show that as before we meet George and lennie everything runs away as if a storms coming and everyone runs away. Steinbeck does this to raise awareness that the protagonists of the story are coming. After the shade disappears to the hilltop the rabbits run away telling us to “prepare” for the entrance of the two protagonists. The smile “as gravy sculptured stones” shows that the rabbits were peaceful like rocks. Stones are peaceful and do not move around a lot so the author has tried to show the readers the peaceful atmosphere before the entrance of George and Lennie. “Evening of a hot day started the little… footsteps on crisp sycamore leaves…opening by the green pool” the author has gone into detail in describing the atmosphere –using adjectives- before George and Lennie appear because he wants the reader to feel that the sense of peace and tranquillity is disturbed by the presence of our protagonists. The powerful verb “hurried noiselessly” shows us that the rabbits hurried away to be unnoticed because they sensed something Huge was coming moreover the reader feels that the rabbits are scared of what’s to come and from this we can see that the rabbits can sense danger in lennie and George.
Steinbeck uses ( when some one commands you) to depict the relationship between George and Lennie. An example of this would be, “Lennie, for God’ sakes don’t drink so much.” Here, George has been portrayed as the character that is the commandeer of Lennie; steinbeck uses the adjective-imagery to show the relationship between the scout and the leader. Also, Steinbeck also uses a blasphemous term when he is trying to grab the attention of Lennie, '...for God...'. The reason I have chosen to use this very vauge term is becasue is dennotes that George is looking too God, to stop Lennie in his tracks, no becasue He wants Lennie not to drink any water, but beacsue he doesn't want Lennie to get sick, "You gonna be sick like you was last night.". I think this connotes the relationship between George and Lennie; George is only looking for the well being of Lennie.
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